Analyze texts, data, and arguments critically. Move beyond summary to deep interpretation.
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Analysis is one of the most frequently requested skills in academic and professional writing, yet it is also one of the most misunderstood. Students are told to "analyze" a text, a dataset, or an argument, but many struggle to understand what analysis actually means and how it differs from summary. This section draws a clear line between the two, introduces the foundational "so what?" question that drives all analysis, and shows you how to move from describing what something says to explaining what it means.
The simplest way to understand analysis is to contrast it with summary.
Summary answers the question: What does the source say?
Analysis answers the question: What does it mean, and why does it matter?
Summary restates. Analysis interprets. Summary describes. Analysis explains. Summary reports the surface. Analysis digs beneath it.
Consider this passage from a hypothetical news article:
"In 2024, the city of Portland reduced its public library budget by 18%, resulting in the closure of four branch libraries and the elimination of 60 staff positions. The remaining branches reduced their operating hours by an average of 12 hours per week."
A summary of this passage might read:
Portland cut its library budget by 18% in 2024, which led to four branch closures, 60 job cuts, and reduced hours at the remaining branches.
This is accurate. It captures the key facts. But it does not do any intellectual work. It simply condenses the original.
An analysis of the same passage might read:
Portland's 18% library budget cut reveals a troubling set of priorities: the city chose to reduce investment in one of its most equitable public institutions during a period when demand for library services — including digital literacy programs, job search support, and free internet access — was at an all-time high. The closure of four branches disproportionately affects low-income neighborhoods that lack alternative resources, suggesting that the budget decision will deepen existing inequalities rather than address the fiscal pressures that prompted it.
Notice the difference. The analysis does not simply restate the facts. It interprets their significance, identifies consequences the original passage does not mention, and makes a claim about what the budget cut reveals about the city's values.
The single most powerful tool in analysis is the "so what?" question. After you state any fact, observation, or piece of evidence, ask yourself: So what? Why does this matter? What does this tell us?
This question forces you past the surface and into interpretation.
Observation: The author uses short, fragmented sentences throughout the final chapter.
So what? The fragmented sentences mirror the protagonist's deteriorating mental state, creating a reading experience that feels as disoriented and unstable as the character's own perception. This stylistic choice forces the reader to experience the breakdown rather than simply observing it from a distance.
Observation: Company X's revenue grew 15% last quarter.
So what? While 15% growth appears impressive in isolation, it represents a significant deceleration from the 40% growth the company achieved in the same quarter of the previous year. This slowdown coincides with the entry of two major competitors into the market, suggesting that Company X's growth is being constrained by increased competition rather than market saturation.
Observation: The survey found that 72% of respondents support stricter environmental regulations.
So what? The 72% figure is notable not just for its size but for its composition. Support was nearly uniform across political affiliations, income levels, and geographic regions — a rare consensus in an era of deep political polarization. This suggests that environmental regulation may be one of the few policy areas where broad public agreement could enable bipartisan legislative action.
In each case, the "so what?" question transforms a bare observation into a meaningful insight. The observation is the starting point. The analysis is the destination.
Summary and analysis are not binary categories. They exist on a spectrum, and most writing contains elements of both. The key is understanding where you are on that spectrum and pushing toward the analytical end.
| Level | What It Does | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Pure summary | Restates facts without comment | "The study found that 60% of participants preferred option A." |
| Summary with observation | Restates facts and notes something notable | "The study found that 60% preferred option A, a larger margin than researchers expected." |
| Description with implication | Notes what something suggests | "The 60% preference for option A suggests that participants value convenience over cost." |
| Analysis | Interprets significance, explores causes/effects, makes a claim | "The strong preference for option A reveals that convenience has become the dominant decision factor in this market, a shift likely driven by the increasing time pressure of modern work schedules. This finding challenges the industry's longstanding assumption that price is the primary driver of consumer choice." |
| Deep analysis | Connects to broader patterns, questions assumptions, considers implications | "The dominance of convenience over cost in consumer preferences represents a fundamental shift in market dynamics that legacy pricing models cannot account for. Companies that continue to compete primarily on price risk losing market share to competitors who redesign their offerings around time savings and ease of use." |
Notice how each level adds more of the writer's own thinking. At the summary end, the writer contributes nothing original. At the deep analysis end, the writer is making connections, challenging assumptions, and generating new understanding.
Many writers default to summary because it feels safe. Summarizing is low-risk: you are reporting what someone else said, so you cannot be "wrong." Analysis requires you to make a claim, to commit to an interpretation, to say something that could be challenged. That feels risky.
But analysis is where the real value lies — both in academic writing and in professional contexts. Consider two employees who attend the same meeting and send their manager an email about it:
Employee A (summary): "In today's meeting, the marketing team presented Q3 results. Revenue was up 8%. Social media engagement increased 15%. The new campaign launched on schedule."
Employee B (analysis): "The marketing team's Q3 results look strong on the surface, but the 8% revenue increase trails the 12% industry average, suggesting our campaign is underperforming relative to market conditions. The 15% social media engagement boost is encouraging, but engagement has not yet translated into conversions — something we should investigate before scaling the campaign further."
Employee B's email is more useful because it interprets the data rather than merely reporting it. This is exactly what analysis does in academic writing as well: it adds value by telling the reader something they would not have seen on their own.
In literary analysis, the most common mistake is retelling the story instead of analyzing it.
In Chapter 3, Romeo goes to the Capulet party and sees Juliet for the first time. He is immediately attracted to her and they speak for the first time. Later that night, he goes to her balcony and they declare their love for each other.
This is plot summary. It tells the reader what happened, but any reader who has read the play already knows this. Analysis would examine why Shakespeare structures the scene this way, what the language reveals, or how the scene functions within the larger work.
In data-driven writing, summarizing numbers without explaining their significance is the equivalent of plot summary.
The survey received 1,200 responses. 45% were from women and 55% from men. The average age was 34. Most respondents lived in urban areas.
These are demographics, not analysis. Analysis would ask: What does this respondent profile tell us about the survey's validity? Are certain populations over- or underrepresented? How might the demographic composition affect the findings?
Listing what multiple sources say without synthesizing or evaluating them is another form of summary.
Smith (2019) argues that social media harms mental health. Jones (2020) found similar results. Lee (2021) also supports this conclusion.
This tells the reader that three sources agree, but it does not analyze the implications. Why do they agree? What methodology did they use? Are there limitations? What does the consensus suggest about the issue?
Some writers sprinkle in analytical-sounding phrases ("This shows that..." or "This demonstrates...") while still essentially summarizing. The phrases alone do not create analysis. What matters is whether the sentence that follows actually interprets or merely restates.
"This shows that the author uses imagery." (Still summary — it just labels a technique.)
"The author's water imagery throughout the first half of the novel — rain, tears, flooding rivers — creates an atmosphere of emotional overflow that foreshadows the protagonist's breakdown in Chapter 12. By the time the breakdown occurs, the reader has been subconsciously prepared for it through dozens of small, accumulating images of things that cannot be contained." (Actual analysis — it interprets what the imagery does and why it matters.)
Analysis is not just a writing technique. It is a way of thinking. Analytical thinkers do not accept information at face value. They ask questions:
Developing this habit of questioning transforms not just your writing but your thinking. Every text you read, every dataset you examine, every argument you encounter becomes richer when you approach it analytically.
| Concept | Key Point |
|---|---|
| Summary | Restates what a source says |
| Analysis | Interprets what it means and why it matters |
| The "so what?" question | The essential tool for moving from summary to analysis |
| The spectrum | Writing exists on a continuum from pure summary to deep analysis |
| Why summary feels safer | No risk of being wrong — but also no added value |
| Common traps | Plot retelling, data reporting, source stacking, fake analysis words |
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Analysis does not happen in a vacuum. Strong analysts use frameworks — structured approaches that guide them toward meaningful observations and interpretations. A framework gives you a set of questions to ask and a lens through which to view your subject. Without a framework, analysis can feel aimless: you know you are supposed to go deeper, but you are not sure where to dig.
This section introduces four major analytical frameworks that apply across academic and professional writing: rhetorical analysis, textual analysis, data analysis, and critical analysis. Each framework has its own set of questions, its own vocabulary, and its own standards for what counts as a strong insight.
Rhetorical analysis examines how a text persuades its audience. Rather than focusing on what the text says, rhetorical analysis focuses on the strategies the author uses to make the audience think, feel, or act in a particular way.
At the core of rhetorical analysis are three elements, often called the rhetorical triangle:
| Element | Definition | Key Questions |
|---|---|---|
| Ethos (credibility) | The author's trustworthiness and authority | How does the author establish credibility? What qualifications, tone, or evidence do they use to make the audience trust them? |
| Pathos (emotion) | The emotional appeal to the audience | What emotions does the author evoke? How do specific word choices, images, or stories affect the reader emotionally? |
| Logos (logic) | The logical structure of the argument | What evidence does the author present? How is the argument organized? Are the logical connections sound? |
Consider a political speech that opens with a personal story about a struggling family, then presents economic data showing rising costs, and closes with a call to vote for a specific policy.
A summary would describe the speech's content: "The speaker told a story about a family, presented data on costs, and asked the audience to support the policy."
A rhetorical analysis would examine how each element works to persuade:
The speaker opens with the personal story of a single mother working two jobs to afford childcare — a deliberate appeal to pathos that humanizes abstract economic data and establishes an emotional foundation before any statistics are introduced. By leading with empathy rather than data, the speaker ensures that the audience is already emotionally invested when the logos-driven section begins. The economic data — presented in stark, simple figures rather than complex charts — is designed for accessibility, not academic rigor, reflecting the speaker's awareness that this audience responds more to concrete dollar amounts than percentages. The closing call to action leverages the urgency (kairos) of an approaching election, transforming the emotional and logical groundwork into a specific behavioral request: vote.
Notice how the analysis examines the strategy behind each element, not just its presence. It does not merely say "the speaker uses pathos." It explains how the pathos is constructed, why it is placed where it is, and what effect it creates.
Rhetorical analysis is most useful when examining:
Textual analysis examines the language, structure, and literary techniques within a text to uncover meaning. While rhetorical analysis focuses on persuasion, textual analysis focuses on how meaning is constructed through specific artistic and linguistic choices.
| Element | What to Look For |
|---|---|
| Diction (word choice) | Why did the author choose this word over a synonym? What connotations does it carry? |
| Imagery | What sensory details does the author use? What patterns emerge in the imagery? |
| Figurative language | How do metaphors, similes, and symbols create meaning beyond the literal? |
| Syntax (sentence structure) | Are sentences long or short? Simple or complex? How does the rhythm affect the reading experience? |
| Structure | How is the text organized? What is the effect of the ordering of ideas, scenes, or arguments? |
| Tone and voice | What is the author's attitude? How does it shift throughout the text? |
| Point of view | Who is telling the story or presenting the argument? What does this perspective include or exclude? |
| Motifs and patterns | What recurring images, words, or ideas appear? What do these repetitions suggest? |
Consider this opening line from George Orwell's 1984:
"It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen."
A summary-level response would say: "The novel opens with a description of the weather and the time."
A textual analysis would examine the language closely:
Orwell's opening sentence establishes unease through a carefully constructed contradiction. "Bright cold day in April" begins with familiar, almost pleasant language — brightness and springtime evoke renewal and warmth. But "cold" disrupts the expected pairing of bright and warm, introducing discomfort. The decisive break comes with "the clocks were striking thirteen." In a twelve-hour clock system, thirteen is impossible. The reader immediately understands that this world operates under different rules. Orwell does not explain the political system, the surveillance apparatus, or the nature of Big Brother in this opening line. Instead, he signals the wrongness of the entire world through a single, precise detail. The effect is far more powerful than any exposition could be: the reader feels that something is off before they understand what it is.
This analysis examines diction ("bright cold"), structure (the sentence's two-part construction), and effect (how the reader experiences the contradiction). It makes a claim about Orwell's technique and supports it with specific evidence from the text.
Textual analysis is most useful when examining:
Data analysis examines quantitative and qualitative data to identify patterns, trends, anomalies, and their significance. In academic and professional writing, data analysis means going beyond reporting numbers to interpreting what they mean.
Consider this dataset:
A university's retention rate dropped from 88% to 79% over three years. During the same period, tuition increased 22%, the percentage of students working part-time jobs rose from 45% to 68%, and the university cut its academic advising staff by 30%.
A summary would restate these numbers. An analysis would interpret them:
The 9-percentage-point drop in retention coincides with three significant changes: rising tuition, increased student employment, and reduced advising capacity. While no single factor can be isolated as the definitive cause, the pattern is suggestive. The 22% tuition increase likely forced more students into part-time employment — the jump from 45% to 68% of students working while enrolled supports this interpretation. Students who work more hours have less time for coursework and less flexibility to access support services. Simultaneously, the 30% reduction in advising staff means fewer professionals are available to identify and intervene with at-risk students. The convergence of financial pressure, time constraints, and reduced institutional support creates a compounding effect: each factor amplifies the others. Notably, the data does not tell us whether the students who left were primarily those facing financial hardship, those lacking academic support, or those overwhelmed by competing demands — a limitation that the university should address through exit surveys before designing interventions.
This analysis identifies relationships between variables, proposes causal mechanisms, acknowledges limitations, and suggests next steps.
Data analysis is essential when working with:
Critical analysis evaluates the strengths, weaknesses, assumptions, and implications of an argument, theory, policy, or work. It goes beyond asking "what does this say?" to ask "how well does it hold up under scrutiny?"
| Category | Questions |
|---|---|
| Assumptions | What does the argument take for granted? Are those assumptions justified? |
| Evidence | Is the evidence sufficient, relevant, and credible? Are there gaps? |
| Logic | Does the conclusion follow from the premises? Are there logical fallacies? |
| Perspective | Whose viewpoint is represented? Whose is missing? |
| Context | What circumstances shaped this argument? Would it hold in different contexts? |
| Implications | What are the consequences of accepting this argument? Who benefits? Who is harmed? |
| Alternatives | What other explanations or approaches exist? Why were they not chosen? |
Consider this argument:
"Social media should be banned for children under 16 because studies show it increases anxiety and depression in young people."
A summary would restate the claim. A critical analysis would evaluate it:
The argument that social media should be banned for children under 16 rests on the assumption that the relationship between social media use and adolescent mental health is straightforwardly causal — that social media directly causes anxiety and depression. However, the research landscape is more complex. Many of the cited studies demonstrate correlation rather than causation. It is equally plausible that adolescents already experiencing anxiety and depression turn to social media as a coping mechanism, or that both phenomena are driven by a third variable, such as increasing academic pressure or reduced face-to-face social interaction. Furthermore, the argument treats social media as a monolithic entity, ignoring significant differences between platforms: a teenager using YouTube to learn music production has a qualitatively different experience than one scrolling algorithmically curated image feeds on Instagram. A blanket ban fails to distinguish between harmful and beneficial uses. Finally, the proposed age threshold of 16 appears arbitrary — the argument provides no evidence that 16 represents a meaningful developmental milestone for social media readiness, nor does it address the practical enforcement challenges of age-based restrictions on platforms that cannot reliably verify user age.
This critical analysis evaluates the evidence (correlation vs. causation), challenges the assumptions (social media as monolithic, age threshold as meaningful), considers alternative explanations, and identifies practical problems with the proposed solution.
Critical analysis applies broadly:
| If You Are Analyzing... | Use This Framework |
|---|---|
| A speech, ad, or persuasive text | Rhetorical analysis |
| Literature, poetry, or artistic writing | Textual analysis |
| Numbers, trends, or research findings | Data analysis |
| An argument, theory, or policy | Critical analysis |
| A complex topic | Combine two or more frameworks |
In practice, strong analytical writing often blends frameworks. A policy analysis might combine data analysis (examining the numbers) with critical analysis (evaluating the argument) and rhetorical analysis (examining how the policy was sold to the public). The frameworks are tools in your toolkit — use whichever combination best serves your purpose.
| Framework | Core Question | Focus |
|---|---|---|
| Rhetorical analysis | How does it persuade? | Strategies, audience, purpose |
| Textual analysis | How does language create meaning? | Diction, imagery, structure, patterns |
| Data analysis | What do the numbers mean? | Trends, patterns, causation, limitations |
| Critical analysis | How well does the argument hold up? | Assumptions, evidence, logic, alternatives |
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Having the right framework is only the beginning. The real challenge is turning your observations into a coherent analytical argument — one that makes a claim about significance, interprets evidence systematically, and develops insights that go beyond the obvious. This section teaches you how to build an analytical argument from the ground up: from observation, through interpretation, to insight.
Every analytical argument moves through three levels:
You notice something specific in the text, data, or argument you are examining. This is the "what" — what you see, what the evidence shows, what the source says.
The author uses the word "freedom" fourteen times in the first three paragraphs.
You explain what the observation means. This is the "so what?" — you interpret the significance of what you noticed.
The repetition of "freedom" is not accidental. By saturating the opening with this word, the author primes the audience to associate the subsequent policy proposal with personal liberty, even though the policy itself involves increased government regulation. The word functions as a framing device that shapes how the audience processes the argument before they encounter its substance.
You connect the interpretation to a broader understanding or make a claim that the reader would not have reached on their own. This is the "what now?" — the larger significance.
This rhetorical strategy reveals a fundamental tension in modern political discourse: policies that expand government authority are routinely marketed using the language of individual freedom. The author's use of "freedom" illustrates how political language has become detached from policy substance, functioning instead as a branding tool that bypasses critical evaluation.
Notice how each level adds depth. The observation alone is just a fact. The interpretation explains why the fact matters. The insight connects it to a pattern or principle that extends beyond the specific text.
The heart of any analytical argument is a claim about significance — a statement that says not just what you observed but what it means and why it matters.
A strong analytical claim is:
A reliable structure for analytical claims follows this pattern:
[Specific observation] + [interpretive verb] + [claim about meaning]
| Observation | Interpretive Verb | Claim About Meaning |
|---|---|---|
| The declining voter turnout among 18-24 year olds | suggests | that young people feel excluded from a political system designed around the priorities of older generations |
| The protagonist's refusal to name the antagonist | reveals | a psychological inability to confront the trauma directly, mirroring the novel's broader theme of suppressed memory |
| The 40% gap between projected and actual sales | indicates | that the company's market research relied on assumptions about consumer behavior that do not hold in a post-pandemic economy |
The verbs you use signal to the reader that you are interpreting, not just reporting. Strong interpretive verbs include:
reveals, suggests, demonstrates, illustrates, reflects, exposes, undermines, reinforces, complicates, challenges, highlights, signals, implies, indicates, points to, calls into question
Avoid weak or neutral verbs that do not commit to an interpretation:
shows (too vague), talks about (too casual), says (merely reports), is about (describes topic, not meaning)
In an analytical argument, every piece of evidence requires interpretation. The structure of an analytical paragraph follows a specific pattern that moves from evidence to meaning.
Think of each piece of evidence as the middle layer of a sandwich:
The most common mistake in analytical writing is presenting evidence without the bottom layer — the analysis. Writers quote a passage or cite a statistic and then move on to the next point, leaving the reader to figure out the significance on their own. This is the writer's job, not the reader's.
Claim: Orwell's Animal Farm uses the gradual corruption of language to illustrate how authoritarian regimes maintain power through the manipulation of truth.
[Setup] One of the most effective devices in Animal Farm is the progressive revision of the Seven Commandments that govern the animals' society. [Evidence] The original commandment "All animals are equal" is eventually amended to read "All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others." [Analysis] This revision is not presented as a sudden, dramatic change but as the final step in a long series of subtle alterations, each one slightly expanding the pigs' privileges while preserving the appearance of fairness. The phrase "more equal" is an oxymoron — equality, by definition, cannot have degrees. Yet within the world of the novel, the animals accept it because each previous revision has gradually numbed their capacity for critical evaluation. Orwell is not merely satirizing Soviet communism; he is illustrating a universal mechanism of authoritarian control. By corrupting language incrementally, those in power make each new injustice seem like a reasonable extension of the status quo rather than the violation it actually represents. The reader recognizes the absurdity that the characters within the story cannot see, creating dramatic irony that serves as both entertainment and warning.
Notice the ratio of evidence to analysis. The evidence is one sentence. The analysis is six sentences. This ratio — far more analysis than evidence — is characteristic of strong analytical writing.
The difference between competent analysis and excellent analysis lies in the quality of insight. Competent analysis correctly identifies what a text does. Excellent analysis reveals something the reader had not considered.
The most interesting analytical insights often emerge from contradictions — moments where the text, data, or argument says one thing but does another, or where two elements pull in opposite directions.
The company's annual report emphasizes its commitment to sustainability while simultaneously reporting a 34% increase in carbon emissions. This contradiction is not addressed anywhere in the document, suggesting that "sustainability" functions in corporate communications as a reputational tool rather than an operational commitment.
Analyzing what is missing can be as revealing as analyzing what is present. What voices, perspectives, data points, or acknowledgments are absent? What does the absence tell us?
The study examines the impact of school closures on student learning outcomes but includes no data from students with disabilities, who represent 14% of the school-age population and were disproportionately affected by the shift to remote learning. This omission limits the study's conclusions and perpetuates a pattern in education research where the most vulnerable populations are systematically underrepresented.
Move beyond identifying what happened to explaining the chain of causation. Why did this occur? What made it possible? What did it lead to?
The protagonist's decision to destroy the letters is not impulsive — it is the inevitable result of the novel's carefully constructed emotional logic. Each preceding chapter has shown the protagonist choosing avoidance over confrontation: changing the subject when her mother asks about the past, taking detours to avoid the old house, referring to the event only as "what happened." The destruction of the letters is the final act in a pattern of erasure, and its apparent suddenness is actually the culmination of a deliberate, sustained retreat from memory.
The strongest insights connect specific observations to larger ideas, trends, or principles. They show the reader that this particular text, dataset, or argument is an example of something bigger.
The city's decision to demolish public housing and replace it with mixed-income developments follows a pattern visible in dozens of American cities since the 1990s: the replacement of concentrated poverty with dispersed poverty, marketed as revitalization but experienced by displaced residents as exile. The policy does not eliminate poverty; it merely makes it less visible to those with political power.
Every text, study, or argument operates within a frame — a set of assumptions about what is important, what is normal, and what counts as evidence. Questioning the frame itself is one of the most powerful analytical moves.
The debate over standardized testing typically frames the issue as a question of measurement accuracy: do the tests measure what they claim to measure? But this framing accepts the premise that student ability can and should be reduced to a numerical score. A more fundamental question — whether quantifying human learning is itself a valid goal — is rarely asked, because the testing industry, the college admissions system, and the accountability movement all depend on the assumption that it is.
A complete analytical essay follows a structure that builds from observation to insight:
An analytical thesis differs from other thesis types because it makes a claim about meaning:
| Type | Example |
|---|---|
| Descriptive (not a thesis) | The novel uses water imagery. |
| Argumentative | The novel should be included in the high school curriculum. |
| Analytical | The novel's pervasive water imagery charts the protagonist's emotional journey from stagnation to renewal, with each body of water representing a different stage of psychological transformation. |
The analytical thesis tells the reader: "I have found a pattern, and here is what it means."
"The author uses a lot of symbolism in this story."
This labels a technique but does not analyze it. What symbols? What do they mean? How do they function in the story?
"This shows that all politicians are corrupt."
Analysis should be proportional to evidence. One speech by one politician does not prove a universal claim about all politicians.
Strong analysis acknowledges evidence that complicates or contradicts the claim. Ignoring inconvenient evidence weakens credibility.
When wrapping up an analytical argument, do not repeat your observations. Instead, show what they add up to — the larger picture that emerges from the individual pieces.
| Concept | Key Point |
|---|---|
| Three levels | Observation → Interpretation → Insight |
| Analytical claims | Interpretive, arguable, specific, consequential |
| Evidence sandwich | Setup → Evidence → Analysis |
| Evidence-to-analysis ratio | Analysis should be longer than the evidence it interprets |
| Developing insights | Look for tensions, absences, causes, patterns, and frames |
| Analytical thesis | Makes a claim about meaning, not just topic |
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This section presents extended before-and-after examples showing the transformation from weak analysis to strong analysis across different types of writing. Study each pair carefully. Notice not just what changes between the weak and strong versions but how and why the improvements work.
Analyze how F. Scott Fitzgerald uses setting in The Great Gatsby to develop the novel's themes.
In The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald uses different settings to show different things. The Valley of Ashes is a poor area between West Egg and New York City. It is described as a desolate place covered in gray ash. This shows that there is poverty in America. Tom and the other rich characters drive through the Valley of Ashes on their way to the city, which shows that the rich do not care about the poor. The green light at the end of Daisy's dock is also an important setting detail. Gatsby stares at the green light, which represents his dream of being with Daisy. The eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg on the billboard watch over the Valley of Ashes. Overall, Fitzgerald uses setting to show different aspects of the 1920s in America.
Fitzgerald constructs the geography of The Great Gatsby as a moral map of 1920s America, in which physical space encodes social hierarchy and spiritual condition. The Valley of Ashes — the industrial wasteland between the wealth of Long Island and the glamour of Manhattan — functions not merely as a setting but as the novel's moral center. It is the place where the consequences of upper-class consumption become visible: the ash that coats everything is the literal residue of the industrial production that funds the Eggs' lavish lifestyles. That Tom Buchanan drives through this landscape without seeing it — his eyes fixed on the destination, never the route — mirrors the broader moral blindness of the wealthy class Fitzgerald portrays. They consume without acknowledging the cost.
The geography becomes even more significant when read alongside the eyes of Doctor T.J. Eckleburg, the faded billboard that presides over the Valley of Ashes. These eyes — enormous, bespectacled, and unblinking — are the novel's most unsettling image precisely because they suggest observation without intervention. They see everything and do nothing. In a novel where no character takes moral responsibility for their actions, the Eckleburg eyes become a symbol of absent judgment: the gaze of a society that has abandoned the moral frameworks it once claimed to uphold. George Wilson's later conflation of the eyes with "the eyes of God" underscores the point — in Fitzgerald's America, even divine authority has been reduced to a commercial advertisement, watching but powerless.
The green light that Gatsby watches from across the bay completes the novel's spatial symbolism. It is always distant, always across water, always unreachable — not because Daisy is physically far away, but because what Gatsby seeks is not a person but an idealized past that never existed. The light's color — green, the color of both money and natural growth — conflates material acquisition with emotional fulfillment, the central confusion that drives Gatsby and, Fitzgerald suggests, the American Dream itself. That the light is visible only at night, when the world is in darkness, reinforces its function as an illusion: it is brightest when reality is least visible.
Analyze the following data on employee satisfaction at Company X and recommend actions.
Data: Overall satisfaction dropped from 78% to 61% over two years. Satisfaction with management dropped from 72% to 48%. Satisfaction with compensation remained stable at 65%. Satisfaction with work-life balance dropped from 81% to 54%. Employee turnover increased from 12% to 23%.
The data shows that employee satisfaction at Company X has decreased significantly. Overall satisfaction went from 78% to 61%. Management satisfaction dropped from 72% to 48%. Compensation satisfaction stayed the same at 65%. Work-life balance satisfaction went from 81% to 54%. Turnover increased from 12% to 23%. These numbers show that employees are unhappy and the company should try to improve satisfaction.
The employee satisfaction data reveals a company undergoing a management crisis, not a compensation crisis. While overall satisfaction declined by 17 percentage points over two years, the decline was not uniform across categories. Compensation satisfaction held steady at 65%, indicating that employees are not primarily dissatisfied with their pay. The sharpest drops occurred in management satisfaction (down 24 points to 48%) and work-life balance (down 27 points to 54%) — two categories that are closely linked, since management decisions directly shape workload expectations, scheduling flexibility, and the culture around overtime.
The pattern suggests a specific diagnosis: something changed in how the company is managed — new leadership, restructured teams, increased performance pressure — that simultaneously eroded trust in management and destroyed work-life balance. The fact that compensation satisfaction remained stable during this period is significant because it eliminates the most common explanation for rising turnover. Employees are not leaving for better pay. They are leaving because the working conditions have become unsustainable.
The near-doubling of turnover (from 12% to 23%) confirms the severity of the problem. At a 23% annual turnover rate, the company is replacing nearly a quarter of its workforce every year, incurring substantial costs in recruitment, onboarding, and lost institutional knowledge. More critically, turnover at this level typically becomes self-reinforcing: departing employees increase the workload on those who remain, further degrading work-life balance, which drives additional departures.
The recommended intervention should focus on the root cause — management practices — rather than the symptoms. Raising compensation is unlikely to stem turnover if the underlying issues of overwork and poor management persist. Instead, the company should conduct confidential exit interviews to identify specific management behaviors driving dissatisfaction, audit workload distribution across teams, and evaluate whether recent policy or leadership changes coincide with the onset of the decline.
Analyze the following argument: "Universities should eliminate humanities departments because humanities graduates have lower starting salaries than STEM graduates, proving that humanities degrees are not valuable."
This argument says that humanities departments should be eliminated because humanities graduates earn less than STEM graduates. While this is true according to some salary data, I disagree. Humanities are important because they teach critical thinking and communication. Many employers value these skills. Therefore, the argument is wrong and humanities departments should not be eliminated.
The argument that universities should eliminate humanities departments because humanities graduates earn lower starting salaries than STEM graduates rests on a chain of reasoning that collapses at multiple points.
First, the argument equates the value of a degree with starting salary, an assumption that is both narrow and misleading. Starting salary measures the market price of a graduate's first job — it says nothing about career trajectory, lifetime earnings, job satisfaction, civic engagement, or the broader intellectual and cultural contributions of an educated population. Mid-career salary data tells a different story: graduates in fields like philosophy and political science frequently close the earnings gap with STEM graduates within 10-15 years, as their skills in writing, argumentation, and ethical reasoning become increasingly valuable in leadership and management roles. By using starting salary as the sole measure of value, the argument adopts a metric that systematically understates the long-term returns of humanities education.
Second, the argument conflates individual career outcomes with the institutional purpose of a university. Even if humanities graduates earned less throughout their careers — which the data does not consistently support — it would not follow that universities should eliminate humanities departments. Universities serve purposes beyond job training: they preserve cultural heritage, advance human understanding, produce research in ethics, history, and philosophy that informs public policy, and cultivate the critical thinking and communication skills that sustain democratic societies. Reducing the purpose of a university to salary optimization would logically require eliminating not just humanities but any program whose graduates earn below average — including education, social work, and the arts — a conclusion that would gut the institutions that communities depend on.
Third, the argument contains a logical fallacy: it assumes that because Group A earns less than Group B, Group A's education is not valuable. This does not follow. Salary is determined by market demand, industry norms, and negotiation dynamics, not solely by the quality or utility of one's education. Nurses earn less than investment bankers. No one seriously argues that nursing education is therefore valueless. The argument mistakes market compensation for intrinsic worth.
Finally, the argument ignores the interdependence of disciplines within a university. STEM fields benefit from humanities: engineers take ethics courses, medical students study bioethics, computer scientists engage with philosophy of mind. Eliminating humanities departments would impoverish the education of STEM students themselves, producing technically skilled graduates who lack the ethical frameworks, historical awareness, and communication abilities needed to apply their skills responsibly.
Analyze the rhetorical strategies in the following excerpt from a fundraising email: "Right now, a child in your community is going to bed hungry. Not in some faraway country. Not in a news story. In your neighborhood, tonight. Your $25 donation can provide a week of meals for a child who has nothing."
This fundraising email uses emotional language to make the reader feel bad about hungry children. It says a child is hungry in your community and asks for $25. The purpose is to get donations. It is effective because it makes you feel guilty.
The fundraising email constructs urgency and intimacy through a series of deliberate rhetorical moves that progressively close the distance between the reader and the child in need.
The opening sentence — "Right now, a child in your community is going to bed hungry" — uses present tense and temporal immediacy ("right now") to collapse the comfortable distance that allows people to ignore chronic problems. Hunger is not framed as a persistent, statistical reality but as something happening at this moment, as the reader reads the email. The next two sentences — "Not in some faraway country. Not in a news story." — use anaphoric negation to preemptively dismantle the psychological defenses readers typically deploy against charitable appeals. Most people insulate themselves from suffering by categorizing it as distant or abstract. The email explicitly names and rejects both distancing strategies, leaving the reader no comfortable frame through which to dismiss the appeal.
"In your neighborhood, tonight" completes the spatial and temporal narrowing. The progression from "your community" to "your neighborhood" to "tonight" mirrors the rhetorical funnel structure, moving from broad to specific. The possessive "your" appears three times in the short excerpt, repeatedly insisting on the reader's personal connection to and responsibility for the situation.
The final sentence shifts from emotional appeal to action: "$25 can provide a week of meals for a child who has nothing." The specific dollar amount removes the ambiguity that often prevents donation — the reader does not have to wonder what amount would be appropriate. "A week of meals" makes the impact tangible and proportionate. And "a child who has nothing" returns to pathos with a phrase whose simplicity is its power — no statistics, no qualifications, just the stark reality of a child with nothing.
The email's most sophisticated rhetorical move is structural: it leads with emotion, builds identification, and only then makes the ask. By the time the reader encounters the donation request, they have already been positioned — through proximity, present tense, and the dismantling of psychological distance — as someone who is personally connected to the problem and therefore personally obligated to act.
| Principle | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Analyze, do not summarize | Every example shows the transformation from restating content to interpreting meaning |
| Name specific evidence | Strong analysis points to particular words, numbers, structures, or details |
| Explain the mechanism | Do not just identify a technique — explain how and why it works |
| Build a coherent argument | Each analytical point should connect to a larger claim |
| Maintain proportionality | More analysis than evidence in every paragraph |
| Vary your subjects | Analysis skills transfer across literature, data, arguments, and rhetoric |
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This section provides quick-access reference tools for analytical writing: a comprehensive list of analytical verbs organized by function, a framework selection cheatsheet, and a self-editing guide for strengthening analysis in your own drafts.
The verbs you choose signal whether you are summarizing or analyzing. Replace neutral reporting verbs with interpretive verbs to shift your writing from description to analysis.
| Verb | Example |
|---|---|
| reveals | The data reveals a widening gap between urban and rural access to healthcare. |
| suggests | The author's use of passive voice suggests a deliberate avoidance of assigning blame. |
| implies | The omission of demographic data implies that the study did not account for population diversity. |
| indicates | The declining response rate indicates growing survey fatigue among participants. |
| reflects | The policy reflects an assumption that economic growth automatically reduces inequality. |
| illustrates | The case study illustrates how organizational culture shapes individual decision-making. |
| demonstrates | The experiment demonstrates that sleep deprivation impairs judgment more severely than moderate alcohol consumption. |
| exposes | The audit exposes a systematic pattern of underreporting environmental violations. |
| signals | The shift in tone signals a transition from objective reporting to editorial commentary. |
| Verb | Example |
|---|---|
| undermines | The contradictory evidence undermines the study's central conclusion. |
| strengthens | The longitudinal design strengthens the claim that the intervention produces lasting effects. |
| challenges | The findings challenge the conventional assumption that smaller class sizes improve outcomes. |
| validates | The replication study validates the original findings across a more diverse sample. |
| complicates | The exception complicates the otherwise clean correlation between income and educational attainment. |
| supports | The historical precedent supports the argument that sanctions alone rarely achieve regime change. |
| weakens | The small sample size weakens the generalizability of the conclusions. |
| confirms | The follow-up data confirms the initial trend identified in the pilot study. |
| refutes | The new evidence refutes the long-held belief that the two populations are genetically distinct. |
| Verb | Example |
|---|---|
| parallels | The economic downturn parallels the conditions that preceded the 1929 crash. |
| echoes | The protagonist's final speech echoes the language of the opening scene, creating a structural frame. |
| contrasts with | The company's public statements contrast sharply with its internal communications. |
| reinforces | Each subsequent study reinforces the conclusion that early intervention produces better outcomes. |
| extends | The new findings extend the theory to populations that were not included in the original research. |
| builds on | This analysis builds on previous work by incorporating qualitative interview data alongside the quantitative measures. |
| diverges from | The author's conclusion diverges from the consensus view in the field, raising important methodological questions. |
| connects to | The pattern connects to broader trends in post-industrial labor markets across developed economies. |
| Verb | Example |
|---|---|
| drives | Consumer demand for convenience drives the growth of single-use plastic packaging. |
| contributes to | The lack of affordable housing contributes to rising homelessness in major cities. |
| results from | The achievement gap results from compounding disadvantages that begin in early childhood. |
| stems from | The conflict stems from unresolved territorial disputes dating back to the colonial period. |
| triggers | The policy change triggers a cascade of behavioral adjustments across the affected population. |
| enables | The deregulated environment enables practices that would be prohibited under standard oversight. |
| produces | The combination of high pressure and inadequate support produces burnout at rates significantly above the industry average. |
| exacerbates | The funding cuts exacerbate existing disparities between well-resourced and under-resourced schools. |
Use this quick-reference table to choose the right analytical framework for your task.
| You Are Analyzing... | Best Framework | Core Question | Key Moves |
|---|---|---|---|
| A persuasive speech or op-ed | Rhetorical | How does it persuade? | Identify ethos/pathos/logos, examine audience awareness, analyze tone and word choice |
| An advertisement or campaign | Rhetorical | What strategies does it use? | Examine visual and verbal rhetoric, identify target audience, analyze emotional triggers |
| A novel, poem, or short story | Textual | How does language create meaning? | Close-read key passages, identify patterns in imagery/diction/syntax, trace motifs |
| A film or visual text | Textual + Rhetorical | How do form and content interact? | Analyze cinematography, dialogue, editing, sound; connect formal choices to themes |
| Survey results or statistics | Data | What do the numbers mean? | Identify trends/outliers, compare to benchmarks, evaluate limitations, propose causes |
| A scientific study | Data + Critical | What did they find and how reliable is it? | Examine methodology, evaluate sample size, check for confounds, assess generalizability |
| A policy proposal | Critical | How well does it hold up? | Identify assumptions, evaluate evidence, consider unintended consequences, examine alternatives |
| A philosophical argument | Critical | Is the reasoning sound? | Map the logic, identify premises, check for fallacies, test with counterexamples |
| A historical event | Critical + Data | Why did it happen and what did it cause? | Examine causes, evaluate sources, consider multiple perspectives, trace consequences |
| Two competing theories | Critical | Which is more convincing and why? | Compare evidence quality, identify assumptions, test explanatory power, evaluate scope |
Use this checklist to review and improve the analytical quality of your drafts. Work through each step systematically.
Read through your draft and highlight every sentence that restates, describes, or reports without interpreting. These are your summary sentences. Not all summary is bad — you need some to set up your analysis — but if more than 30% of your body paragraphs consist of summary, you need to add interpretation.
Summary flag words: "The author says...", "The text describes...", "The data shows...", "In this scene...", "According to..."
These phrases are not inherently wrong, but they often introduce summary rather than analysis. After each one, check: does the next sentence interpret, or does it continue to describe?
For every claim, observation, or piece of evidence in your draft, ask "so what?" If you cannot answer that question in the next sentence, you have identified a gap in your analysis. Write the answer and add it to your draft.
| Before (observation only) | After ("so what?" answered) |
|---|---|
| The author uses short sentences in this passage. | The author's shift to short, declarative sentences in this passage creates a sense of urgency that mirrors the protagonist's rising panic, forcing the reader to experience the scene at the same breathless pace as the character. |
| Revenue declined 12% in Q3. | The 12% revenue decline in Q3, following two quarters of stagnation, indicates that the company's pricing strategy is failing to retain customers in an increasingly competitive market. |
| The survey found that 60% support the policy. | The 60% support figure is less reassuring than it appears: when broken down by age group, support drops to 38% among respondents under 30, suggesting that the policy's popular mandate may erode as the electorate shifts generationally. |
In each body paragraph, count the sentences devoted to presenting evidence and the sentences devoted to analyzing that evidence. If the ratio favors evidence, your paragraph is doing too much reporting and not enough interpreting.
| Ratio | Assessment | Action |
|---|---|---|
| Evidence > Analysis | Too much reporting | Add interpretation after each piece of evidence |
| Evidence = Analysis | Adequate | Look for opportunities to deepen insights |
| Evidence < Analysis | Strong analytical writing | Verify that analysis is grounded in specific evidence, not speculation |
Scan your draft for the verbs you use to connect evidence to claims. Replace neutral or vague verbs with specific interpretive verbs from the lists above.
| Replace This | With This |
|---|---|
| shows | reveals, demonstrates, illustrates |
| is about | explores, examines, interrogates |
| talks about | argues, contends, addresses |
| says | asserts, claims, maintains |
| uses | employs, deploys, leverages |
| has | exhibits, displays, possesses |
Review your draft for opportunities to connect individual observations to broader patterns, other parts of the text, or larger ideas. Ask:
Every connection you draw deepens your analysis.
Identify every analytical claim in your draft and verify that it is supported by specific evidence. Claims without evidence are opinions, not analysis. If you find an unsupported claim, either add evidence or remove the claim.
Re-read your thesis after completing your draft. Does it accurately represent the analysis you have developed? Often, the thesis you started with is less precise than the argument you actually built. Revise the thesis to match your best insights.
Use this rubric to self-assess the overall quality of your analytical writing.
| Criterion | Needs Work | Developing | Competent | Strong | Excellent |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Depth | Pure summary; no interpretation | Occasional interpretation mixed with heavy summary | Consistent interpretation; some surface-level | Sustained, detailed interpretation throughout | Deep insights that reveal non-obvious connections and meaning |
| Evidence use | No evidence or irrelevant evidence | Some evidence, poorly integrated | Relevant evidence, adequately integrated | Well-chosen evidence with clear signal phrases | Precise, strategically selected evidence that drives the analysis |
| Claim quality | No clear claims | Vague or obvious claims | Clear, specific claims | Arguable, well-supported claims | Original, consequential claims that change the reader's understanding |
| Structure | No logical organization | Some organization; ideas loosely connected | Clear paragraph structure; adequate transitions | Paragraphs build on each other logically | Each paragraph deepens the previous one; the argument accumulates power |
| Vocabulary | Relies on summary verbs | Mix of summary and analytical verbs | Mostly analytical vocabulary | Precise analytical language throughout | Language itself demonstrates analytical sophistication |
When you are stuck, return to these five fundamental moves. Each one transforms a surface observation into an analytical insight.
| Move | What It Does | Trigger Question |
|---|---|---|
| Interpret | Explains what something means | "What does this suggest about...?" |
| Connect | Links one observation to another or to a broader idea | "How does this relate to...?" |
| Evaluate | Assesses the strength, validity, or significance of something | "How well does this hold up?" |
| Contextualize | Places something within a larger framework or history | "What circumstances shaped this?" |
| Complicate | Introduces nuance, contradiction, or tension | "What does this ignore or oversimplify?" |
These five moves — interpret, connect, evaluate, contextualize, complicate — are the building blocks of all analytical writing. Master them, and you can analyze anything.
Use these phrases to transition from evidence to analysis in your writing. They signal to the reader that interpretation is coming.
| Purpose | Phrases |
|---|---|
| Introducing interpretation | This suggests that..., This reveals..., The significance of this is..., What this means is... |
| Explaining causation | This is likely because..., The underlying cause is..., This can be attributed to..., This results from... |
| Drawing implications | The implication is that..., If this is true, then..., This points to a broader pattern of..., The consequence of this is... |
| Noting contradictions | However, this conflicts with..., This stands in tension with..., Notably, this contradicts..., Despite this claim... |
| Connecting to broader ideas | This reflects a larger trend in..., This is consistent with..., Viewed in context, this..., This parallels... |
| Acknowledging complexity | While this appears straightforward, ..., On closer examination..., The picture is complicated by..., This is more nuanced than it first appears because... |
| Qualifying claims | This holds true in most cases, though..., While the evidence is suggestive, it does not conclusively..., This is a strong indicator, though not definitive proof, that... |
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