Artificial Intelligence in the Workplace

This essay demonstrates a clear understanding of the task and presents a consistent position that AI has more benefits than drawbacks. You've made a good start by organizing your ideas into paragraphs and including a personal example, which is a great way to support your argument. The main areas to work on are grammar accuracy, particularly with verb tenses and articles, and expanding your vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. Next time, try to develop each point with more detailed reasoning and examples, and pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and plural forms. With continued practice on these areas, your writing will become more fluent and accurate.

As artificial intelligence continues to develop, many jobs currently performed by humans will be done by machines. Some people regard this as a positive development, while others worry it will cause widespread unemployment and social instability. To what extent do you agree or disagree that the increasing use of AI in the workplace will have more benefits than drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

这篇作文是为本演示而写、未经修改地提交的，不是任何一位学生的作品。下面的评分与批改， 则是给付费用户批改作文的同一条流程的真实输出。

Nowadays the technology is develop very fast, and the artificial intelligence become more and more popular in many company. Some people think this is good thing, but other people are afraid with it. In my opinion, I think the benefit is more than the drawback. First, the AI can help the company to save much money. The robot can work whole day and night without rest, so the cost become lower and the product become cheaper. This is very good for the company and also very good for the customer. Also the AI can help the student to study English, this is very convenient and many student like it. Second, the AI is very useful in the hospital. The computer can check the picture of X-ray very fast. Last year my cousin work in a hospital in Shanghai, he tell me the machine find the problem faster than the doctor. This kind of technology save many lifes. So we can see the AI is very important for our life. But some people worry about their job. When the factory use the robot, less workers are needed. These people have few skill and it is difficult for them to find new work. Also they will be very sad and the society will have many problems. The government should do something about this. In conclusion, although there are some problem, I think the AI is good for the human. The technology always develop and we can not stop it. So we should accept the AI and use it in our life. This is my opinion.

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学生针对自己那篇作文的反馈提问，老师就在同一页回答。正式版里回复框在每个对话下方， 回复后这一条就从待办里消失。

• 子谦，结构是清楚的——四段、立场从开头到结尾没有摇摆，这一点做得对。下面两件事在下一篇之前先解决。 第一是冠词和主谓一致。这两类错误几乎每句都有（"the technology is develop"、"the benefit is more"、"many student like it"），它们拖的是 Grammatical Range 这一项，而且是全篇扣分，不是某一段的问题。系统给你推的「冠词」那一课大概四十分钟，先把它做完。 第二是用词太单薄。整篇里 "very good"、"very fast"、"very useful"、"very important" 反复出现，这些你都有更准确的替换词。 还有一点批改系统看不出来、但考官会扣分：第二段讲公司省钱，中间突然插进"AI 可以帮学生学英语"，和这一段的论点没有关系。宁可把已有的例子写透，也不要再加一个。先把第二段单独重写一遍发我。

  王思远 · 2026年7月16日

AI 负责批改，分数由老师说了算。无论模型多有把握，一篇提交在老师写下评语之前， 都会一直留在待办里显示为「待批阅」。